These pictures were taking during my first Peer Review session. As the first step of the revision process, these peer reviews would prove to be extremely helpful later on in the future. Having someone else read my paper and point out errors that I did not notice on my own allowed myself to gain insight for later papers. After the peer review, I went back into my essay and added paragraphs, transitions, and clarity for confusing sections. There is a tremendous difference between this draft and my final draft of my Literacy Narrative, and part of the reason why is peer reviews.